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(04-17-2023, 06:48 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: I hope all is well Prof, I have received your email expressing your concerns about the academic integrity of my paper I submitted on April 13th. I understand that you have identified some issues with my work, including references to chapters and a sophisticated level of analysis that may be beyond the usual result of undergraduate students.

Additionally, you have pointed out that my SWOT analysis reads more like a policy manual than a personal reflection to provide a clarification regarding the draft I submitted on April 13th. Professor , I want to assure you that the paper was not plagiarized intentionally, and the version that I submitted was just a draft for commentary feedback & this paper was not intended for my final submission. I may have included references to external sources in my paper and should have been more transparent about this. Moving forward, I will clearly indicate any external sources I have used in my work.

I understand that plagiarism is a serious offense and can have severe consequences. I assure you that I have never intentionally plagiarized any material, and I take academic integrity very seriously. The paper that I submitted was based on my own research and writing, but I did not follow the correct referencing guidelines to the best of my ability.
To rectify the situation, I am willing to submit a revised and final version of the paper as soon as possible. I will ensure that the revised version meets all the necessary standards of your expectations and I will provide proper citations and references for all the sources that I have used. That help me pass your previous course & assignments. I was under the pretenses this was a draft not final submission.

I appreciate your understanding and your willingness to work with me to ensure that I meet the academic standards & your expectations of the course

Best Regards

Giving you the benefit of the doubt and assuming you didn't just ask GPTChat to write you an apology in which you ran through a paraphraser and plugged in some relevant specifics, I wish you the best of luck. FYI, you might want to run some of these sentences through an AI checker. I would STRONGLY suggest you do that, in fact.

I'd also focus more on an explanation of how/why it happened as opposed to an acknowledgement that it happened. I don't know the UMPI's policy, but I know the school I work at would absolutely not accept this as an explanation.
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Messages In This Thread
l don’t recommend this school - by @TonetoReal - 04-17-2023, 05:40 PM
I don’t recommend Umpi - by @TonetoReal - 04-17-2023, 06:15 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by jsd - 04-17-2023, 06:18 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by ss20ts - 04-17-2023, 11:06 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by jsd - 04-17-2023, 06:22 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by dsec2013 - 04-17-2023, 07:06 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by moptop - 04-27-2023, 11:33 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by jsd - 04-17-2023, 07:23 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by tsgreer - 04-18-2023, 01:28 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by jsd - 04-18-2023, 04:08 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by dfrecore - 04-17-2023, 08:15 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by Pats20 - 04-18-2023, 12:51 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by Vle045 - 04-18-2023, 12:53 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by Pats20 - 04-18-2023, 08:00 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by dsec2013 - 04-18-2023, 10:29 PM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by ashkir - 04-30-2023, 12:40 AM
RE: l don’t recommend this school - by LevelUP - 04-30-2023, 08:48 AM

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