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04-17-2023, 09:01 PM
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I am writing to inform you about my changes to the paper since the draft version.
As you may recall, the first draft of the paper had some things that needed improvement, particularly in the SWOT analysis section. I needed to be more confident in completing this section accurately, which showed in the initial draft. However, after doing additional research, I better understood the SWOT analysis process and how to apply it effectively.
In the final version of the paper, I addressed the weaknesses of the first draft by revising the SWOT analysis section. I conducted a more thorough analysis of the subject's strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, and threats, and the final version is a significant improvement over the initial draft.
I made minor changes to other sections of the paper, including revising the introduction, some parts of the body conclusion, and references to provide a more cohesive flow of ideas.
I hope you find the paper's final version satisfactory. Thank you for your patience and guidance.
I am truly smarter this everyone on this forum. I stand on what I said.
I don’t even know what GPT is ? Here we go with the false accusations like y’all falsely accused emmett till.
Pathetic.
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(04-17-2023, 07:29 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: It is what is at this point. If I known the school history before I enrolled I would’ve looked elsewhere. I need no know one
“ benefit of doubt.”
Yo, stop playing victim card. No one can know your race, gender, religion because its an entirely online program. You are the first "student" to bring this argument aftrer 100's of students like me completed our degrees successfully, and are happy with the support from this school.
May be some professors are strict academic wise, but they are very nice people. DONT MAKE IT A FUSS when you get caught for plagiarising your academic work. Solve it with the professors if you can.
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04-17-2023, 11:06 PM
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(04-17-2023, 06:20 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: I graduated from community college. This professor accused me of plagiarism on a DRAFt submission be real for God sakes. Drafts is only for commentary purposes
Wrong. The Rough Draft is a chance to get feedback from your professor and have the ability to make corrections before submitting the Final Draft because your entire grade is based on this paper. Plagiarism is covered in every syllabus from UMPI and every other college I have attended. Professors don't mess around with plagiarism. Stop cheating. Write the paper yourself. Cite your work. Then you won't have any problems.
(04-17-2023, 09:07 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/history/i...180979492/
This was over 100 years ago at the University of Maine in Orono not UMPI. It was wrong then. What happened to those poor men is not at all what you are experiencing.
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i don't have a dog in this either way. I like UMPI. I have never been accused of plagiarism. All my courses, I have received equivalents to 4.0. I will admit that I use gpt in certain ways that might help @totonereal. I affirm that I don't use it to cheat and will never do that.
Using prompts to build outlines for upcoming projects.
Using those outlines to help you write your essays.
Using gpt to edit your paper based on rubrics provided in the syllabus.
Giving GPT additional criteria to help it suggest edits within the paper.
Head on over to r/chatgpt if you are going to keep it using it, my guy! You can learn a lot and get better at what you are supposed to be doing!
*Heck* you can even use it to suggest placement of citations..
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I will ask for the last time what is GPT ?
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(04-18-2023, 12:41 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: I will ask for the last time what is GPT ? You seem to know how , so Google it.
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(04-18-2023, 12:41 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: I will ask for the last time what is GPT ?
There is a ton of chatter about ChatGPT. Just Google it. It's Artificial Intelligence.
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04-18-2023, 01:12 PM
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What is it used for ? I don’t understand the use for GPT.
Never mind the use of GPT is beneath me.. I can write my own work.
I don’t need no dam robot to write for me & whoever recommended GPT is very pathetic
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(04-18-2023, 01:12 PM)@TonetoReal Wrote: Never mind the use of GPT is beneath me.. I can write my own work.
Except... you didn't.
I didn't get a chance to see your original post before you edited it, but it's abundantly clear that you didn't write your own paper and you got irrationally upset for being called out on it. I'm torn between you being a troll/trying to prove that UMPI is a degree mill/just incredibly naïve and somehow thinking that UMPI is like elementary school or junior high. Because this sort of thing stops being okay in high school, at the latest.
If you went to school in the US, you should 100% know what plagiarism is and that you shouldn't be submitting "spun" articles as "drafts". Your draft is, obviously, supposed to be the paper that you'll be submitting as a final. It's not supposed to be some random nonsense that has nothing to do with anything. It shouldn't be an easily Google-able paper that has been rewritten with synonyms. This shouldn't be a difficult concept to grasp.
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