Clep College Composition Essay. Please help me by editing and rating clep essay.

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[Are teams or groups beneficial for individuals, or does group membership prevent individuals from forming their own moral judgments? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your studies, experience and observations.]
Anila, I was thinking about your essay as I drove home. The question posed is actually about groups helping or hindering the development of an individual's moral judgements. I have no idea how much they take into account responding to the question, but I would guess a certain percentage. You never really respond to the moral question, unless the reference to a romantic involvement in paragraph 2 is alluding to it, (depending on what that entailed!) You are simply offering the benefits of being in groups versus being on your own. Just something else to take into consideration!
The reason I suggested the flash cards on IC for English Composition is that they will help you with some of the basic errors you are making. Again, I am not an expert, far from it, but they are helping me a lot. I have a long way to go too. Good luck!