Why don't you gather and include details/impact results of those states that do offer free community college. You could work that low debt into an argument of what would even be better is...free CC for all. This way you don't have to rework everything you've done but you will be addressing the point that your mentor has mentioned.
Amberton - MSHRB
TESU - ASNSM/BSBA
TESU - ASNSM/BSBA