03-01-2011, 07:58 PM
I just received my final grade on the main research paper that is due on at the end of the class.....HOLY CRAP! I got a perfect 21!!!!!! How - ????? I'm so freaking happy - I only wish the class was a grade.....that puts me at 90%. Oh, I cranked out the research paper in less than an hour yesterday and it was on a medical condition. Here is the comments I got -
Positive
This is a text book model of an essay that teaches the readers. It is skillfully constructed, well organized and informative. The intro gives the readers all the context we need to understand what we are about to learn and the conclusion gives us a memorable summary of the work.
Improvement
The only thing in this paper that I could find to complain about was the style of the in-text citations. Even these could be right, but they are not a style with which I am familiar.
I can hardly believe this considering my other writing assignments were less than appreciated.
Positive
This is a text book model of an essay that teaches the readers. It is skillfully constructed, well organized and informative. The intro gives the readers all the context we need to understand what we are about to learn and the conclusion gives us a memorable summary of the work.
Improvement
The only thing in this paper that I could find to complain about was the style of the in-text citations. Even these could be right, but they are not a style with which I am familiar.
I can hardly believe this considering my other writing assignments were less than appreciated.
[SIZE="1"]Online CC: A & P I (B)- A & P II (B)[/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]Straighterline: College Algebra - English Comp I & II - General Chem I + Lab - Macroeconomics -Business Communcations - Business Stats - Medical Terminology - Biology[/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]CLEP: Intro Psych 55 - A/I Literature 57 - Intro to Sociology 51 - Human G & D 50 [/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]DSST: Intro to Computing 423 -- HTYH 443 [/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]ECE: Microbiology (3) B[/SIZE]
Penn Foster: Info Lit
Completed Excelsior Associate in Science-Nursing July 30, 2012.
Goal: BSN From Somewhere
[SIZE="1"]Straighterline: College Algebra - English Comp I & II - General Chem I + Lab - Macroeconomics -Business Communcations - Business Stats - Medical Terminology - Biology[/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]CLEP: Intro Psych 55 - A/I Literature 57 - Intro to Sociology 51 - Human G & D 50 [/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]DSST: Intro to Computing 423 -- HTYH 443 [/SIZE]
[SIZE="1"]ECE: Microbiology (3) B[/SIZE]
Penn Foster: Info Lit
Completed Excelsior Associate in Science-Nursing July 30, 2012.
Goal: BSN From Somewhere