11-12-2022, 09:13 PM
(11-12-2022, 05:07 PM)braven Wrote:(11-11-2022, 04:35 PM)KSoul Wrote:I wrote almost ten pages for him. He responded it isn't detailed enough. I met with him, and he said I need to detail the financial impact of the organization more and show him the trail of financial assets. I don't have access to the organization's finances :/(11-10-2022, 06:46 PM)braven Wrote: noah winslow sucks. everything I do he keeps sending back. I followed the rubric exactly and he only responds with comments like "I don't understand your writing" or "use more headers". He requires essays in his freaken milestones
ashkir is my best friend and hasn't seen anything like that
Initially, I was not the biggest fan of Professor Winslow; however, after writing him directly with my final assignment and receiving a detailed and thoughtful response, I changed my tune. In the end, I found him to be a Professor looking for specific information fitting into his correct answer narrative. Once I was clear on that, producing a solid paper and receiving a strong score all fell into place.
As for the milestones, like the English Professor that others complain about, they don't allow you to produce fluff compared to other milestones. This creates frustration and can feel heavy in the requirement for a pass. Take the 3-5 lines out of your head and write until you have answered all the questions in detail. Most of my milestones for them ended up being two paragraphs, but I was in and out vs. getting denied and then frustrated. It ended up being better management of my time and mental state.
Hope this helps.
Don't overthink the request. You can pull numbers from the last earnings report if you have chosen a public company or from the prior year, as there will be ample financial details available on the selected company's website.
You mentioned almost ten pages with energy, which you feel is a lot of writing. With this assignment including images and graphs, under 1o pages is a pretty short submission, and probably this is what he is pushing back on as well. It's not that one couldn't pass with that amount; however, you must make sure you nail the rubric to pull it off.
Once you include the financials, it looks like you will be on the path to passing, so knock them out and keep it moving.
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