TESU Liberal Arts Capstone mentor feedback

[kb4ns1]

My final paper is attached to this post. Since it doesn't come back to you from the professor like all of the other assignments, I'll copy and paste what the professor said about the final paper: "Thank you for this fine final project. Your abstract is fine and this is well organized. Your background is comprehensive as is your definition of terms. The results of your study would benefit from more visuals. Chapter 5 needs more depth and discussion. Your annotated bibliography and list of resources is redundant. This is a very good final submission."

And don't ask me how in the h*ll I was supposed to do the annotated bibliography with the list of resources without being redundant. And honestly, I don't care now since I'm done!

I hope this helps some folks out. I know I wish I would have had more examples to refer to!